Hoshi Ni Naru Made By Sakurai Sho

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

Hello! This is my first Japanese-English-Chinese translation since it's Sho chan's birthday (though I am an hour or so late because of the Chinese lyrics). I'm on vox, LJ and aibakaland forums. Comments are loved. Happy 27th birthday Sho kun! Thank you for always cheering me when I study!

I would be very happy if anyone could point out areas where I can improve. Please post the link of this video to any Chinese/Korean Arashi forums if you can. Thank you and may I have your favour. ^_______________^ v

 

你好! 這是我首編日英中翻譯。是興祝小翔的生日的(不過因為打入中文譯本所以遲了一小時)。我在vox,LJ 及aibakaland論壇皆有户口。我很喜歡評論的。翔君，祝你二十七歲生日快樂!　謝謝你在我讀書的時候為我打氣! 如果大家能指出我可以改善的地方，我會很開心的。請把片子的ｕｒｌ放在中／韓的論壇裹，謝謝，多多指教！^____________^ v

Credits for the hiragana goes to bambina421 of LJ. All translations and romaji done by me and editted by my kind and good friend Kumiko. This clip is also dedicated to all Arashi fans and of course Sho wifeys, esp noted Yuckie chan, mmestrange, jeffer, shida, Mishi, Dyani, Nyanchan, Taccho, Tayuri, Technoteddy, hoshinomi, Lulish, sakurai-storm, STORMY SUBS and SAKURAI SUBS, mclam01, hippiefox, change417 (An chan), enshinge (en-sensei), wingsonwords (Aki chan) and all the mods of all Arashi forums in every human language there is available.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IdPGhXpYv2g 

Edit: fixed typo and LJ cut.... (yeah...) sorry ppl about sounding so tired last night it was around 0330 when i was done so .... Happy Chinese New Year too!

 

 

Lyrics 歌詞:

 

Hoshi Ni Naru Made

 

星になるまで

Until It Becomes a Star

直到成為星星

 

 

By Sakurai Sho 櫻井翔

 

 

 

 

shiiro I do re su to taki shi I do I ssho ni narou ka tsugi no aki ni mo

白いドレスとタキシード一緒になろうか次の秋にも

A white dress and tuxedo, shall we be together maybe next autumn

白色的裙子和晚禮服， 這個來秋我們就一起好嗎？

 

konomamao wasrutoshitarasabishiiyo dakaramouisshoninarouyoakinimo

このまま終わるとしたら寂しいよだからもう一緒になろうよ秋にも

If we only end like this, it'll be sad, so let's get together hopefully this autumn.

如果這樣就完了就是很可惜，　但願這個來秋我們可以一起。

 

kasukanikikoetekurukunenonega sora ni mai chiri yukuyohanenokega

微かに聞こえてくる鐘の音が　空に舞い散りゆくよ羽の毛が

the subtle sounds of bells from the clock we hear, the feathers spread out and dance in the sky

鐘樓傳來輕輕的鐘聲，　　　　空中羽毛四散飛舞，

 

omoidenokyokunokasettosettosuita futariayumumichi sora hareuonegau

思い出の曲のカセットセットした　二人歩む道　空　晴れを願う

I have set up cassette taps with the songs of our memories, wishing the weather/sky to be fine

我將我們的回憶錄成錄音帶的歌曲，希望天晴。

 

hanutabahitotsuhitotsuniomoiokomete itaiminaraissosoroinotogede

花束一つ一つに想いを込めて　痛みならいっそお揃いのトゲで

the bouquet that contained bundles of memories, even if there is pain, it would be from the same thorns.

花球裹一束一束的回憶，就算有痛楚，那就從同一的刺來的。

 

kanaderumerodiniomoiwonosete yorokobinoutadeatariwosomete

奏でるメロディーに想いを乗せて　喜びの歌で辺りを染めて

riding on these memories as the melody played, the joyful song slowly dyed away the sadness

旋律一直奏起，我們乘著這些回憶用喜悅的歌曲染掉悲傷。

 

korekarafutarideikutsumoroshio kasaneteitsukaanosoranohoshito

※これから二人でいくつも年を　重ねていつかあの空の星と

from now on both of us will spend years together, until the day we'll become the stars in the sky

從此以後我們便一起，直到我倆成為天空的星星，

 

naruhimadekyohinokonotokino afurerubakarinoai takainoomoio

なる日まで今日のこの時の　あふれるばかりの愛　互いの想いを

this time today, that love of ours that is about to overflow, the feelings we have between us

此刻，溢滿的爰，我們互有的感情。

 

korekarafutarideikutsumoroshio kasaneteitsukaanosoranohoshito

これから二人でいくつも年を　重ねていつかあの空の星と

from now on both of us will spend years together, until the day we'll become the stars in the sky

從此以後我們便一起，直到我倆成為天空的星星，

 

naruhimadekyohinokonotokino afurerubakarinoai takainoomoio

なる日まで今日のこの時の　あふれるばかりの愛　互いの想いを※

this time today, that love of ours that is about to overflow, the feelings we have between us

此刻，溢滿的爰，我們互有的感情。

 

imadetohachigaukonokonyowo dedarasakinimatsudonnakonnanmo

今までとは違うこの今晩を　出たら先に待つどんな困難も

this time tonight however is different, no matter what difficulties just waiting ahead

此刻今晚卻不同，無論未來會有什麼困難正等待著我們。

 

tatoemondaiokakyaekondato shitemoshinpainadomochironnaiyo

たとえ問題を抱え込んだと　しても心配などもちろんないよ

what problems they be, we'll embrace them, as for worries, of course there are none

無論是什麼問題，我們都會迎接，至於擔心，當然是沒有的。

 

heyayorinaniyorimyojiwomonishi yumenimademitahiwokyotoiusonohini

部屋より何より名字を共にし　夢にまで見た日を今日というその日に

Rather than a room or anything else we share/use under the same surname, today is the day where we will see the dreams that have yet to come true

對比一個我們共同用在一間房間或在任何東西上的名字，今天我們會看到還要實現的夢想。

 

kagirinaiaio maiyomaiyoaio anatawotsutsumikonmuno marudekaiko

限りない愛を　毎夜毎夜愛を　あなたを包み込むの　まるで蚕

boundless love, love that is there every night, I'm going to wrap you up like a cocoon made of love

無限的愛，　　毎夜毎夜的愛， 我將把你包成一個由愛做成的繭。

 

niwanihaookinainugaite musumeniookina”kiss” daite (aha)

庭には大きな犬がいて　娘に大きなkiss抱いて (aha)

there will be a large dog in the garden, there will be our daughter's big kiss when we hug her (aha)

庭園裹會有一隻大狗，當抱起女兒時她會吻我們，

 

sorejafutarinerutoshiyou ishonionajikorekaranoyumeomiyou

それじゃぁ二人寝るとしよう　一緒に同じこれからの夢を見よう

then we'll go to sleep together, dreaming the same dream every night

接著我倆便睡，並夢見同一個夢。

 

※Repeat

 

yameruhimo nakeruhimo hareruhimo aseruhimo

病める日も　泣ける日も　晴れる日も　焦る日も

on days sick, on days we cry, on days that are fine, on days we agitate

無論病的日子，無論哭泣的日子，無論晴的日子，無論焦慮的日子，

 

anatatotsukurebaharereruhito

あなたと作れば晴れる日と

you make the days fine

你都能把日子放晴。

 

yameruhimo nakeruhimo hareruhimo aseruhimo

病める日も　泣ける日も　晴れる日も　焦る日も

on days sick, on days we cry, on days that are fine, on days we agitate

無論病的日子，無論哭泣的日子，無論晴的日子，無論焦慮的日子，

 

anatatonarabahikareshikibo

あなたとならば引かれし希望

as long as you are here, you bring hope

只要你在，你就能帶來希望。

 

ne chichitohahanimazuhaookinakanshawo

ねぇ　父と母にまずは大きな感謝を

hey, first off I have to give my sincerest thanks to father and mother

嗯，　　我首先要向父母們致最誠意的感謝，

 

anataniimatsutaerunarananidarou

あなたに今伝えるなら何だろう

orelse what would I have to tell you

不然我都不知跟你說什麼好了。

 

nankamou kotobajyanakukanshato

なんかもう　言葉じゃなく感謝と　I love you. I love you forever and ever..

anyhow, it's not the words that matter most, I just want to express my thanks

怎樣都好，　說話並非最重要，我只想表達我的感謝。

 

※Repeat

 
 

 

Comments

[streetrat.livejournal.com]

could you put the lyrics behind an lj-cut please?

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

ummm, sorry to say this but i rarely post... and really dont know how so i dont understand or know what you want me to do, if you would explain, that ll be a lot of help. thannks

[streetrat.livejournal.com]

Sure thing!
Basically an LJ-cut takes part of your entry and puts it behind a link, so when you're going through your f-list, you can click on that link (which is the lj cut) and it will show you the whole entry (which is this).

If you're not using richtext to post this entry, right before where the lyrics start put this:

<lj-cut text="Whatever your want your link to say here">

then at the end of your lyrics, put to close the area you want hidden.

If you used rich text to post this entry, instructions here (http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20081015142337AAR1iua) should help :)

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

thank you very much~

[sakurai-storm.livejournal.com]

thank you so much for the dedication <3

it's obvious my favourite is his 'i love you, love you forever, ever' part ^///^

hope you are having/have had a great Sho day, love!

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

im glad to hear from you!

thank you for your fic, subs and translations over the past time!

I like well...the whole song...look, it's too difficult to decide, right?

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

um, sakurai-storm, I was wondering if you are recruiting any translators lately...

I can do Chinese-English translations....

and I really want to help the Arashi community... An chan from tsuribaka offered me something and so far I've finished what she has given me so far. Yet, since tsuribaka is filled with Ohno-ichibanners, I thought you might have something that needs a hand...

so i was wondering if you can allow another Sho wifey in helping you out or joining your club...

I have vox too and your subs are on vox right?

^________________________^ i look forward to your reply.

if it's not ok, then let me know too. i understand. Yuckie chan has nyanchan and she can do it herself. In addition, she also has help from winkychan and rin in japan.

[nicadj.livejournal.com]

ohhh... such a sweet song. I've been looking for a translation of this for so long now. thank you for this.
*sigh* his "I love you, love you forever, ever' part was just to die for. thanks again!

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

thank you so much, i spent a lot of effort doing it. im very happy to hear from you!

the reason i translated this is bc there isnt one hee hee, since i too before searched ages for it...

[cigarettebutts.livejournal.com]

sorry to comment so late, i saw it before the chinese new year and i LOVE it! really really.. it real beautiful how dear sho-chan can fill in lyrics to the tune of cannon in D. it's ♥! i love the way he sings it, like it is so normal it feels as if it is the most natural thing.
i especially love this part there will be a large dog in the garden, there will be our daughter's big kiss when we hug her (aha)
mayb you shudnt put your romaji all in a line, like separate them or sth, it's really easier to read, dont waste your efforts! =))
anw whr did you get the song?

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

i dont mind late comments at all!

Sho chan is to be applauded, what like rap in classical music?! ha, he is marvelous. I swear that if I am ever going to get married, this and One Love will be my wedding songs. hee

I really cant decide which line is my fav, honestly i love the whole thing. I'll be posting up the translation of his 'Where is the Love' remix ver soon if I have time.

I did think about seperating the romaji, but at that time i was simply too tired... ill fix it if i could most likely not though, anyhow, you really made me very happy by commenting. it was very hard work translating it because i self learn Japanese and I had to have my good friend Kumiko overlook it for me which took sometime since i could only see her once a week.

I got the song from Arashian files but since its going a bit whacko, if you can supply me with your regular email address, i can mail this and 'Where is the Love' remix ver to you.

[cigarettebutts.livejournal.com]

priscillakoh.pk@gmail.com
add me as a friend? =DD i'll add you too ♥

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

sent you the 2 songs and added you as a friend ^____^ v

[change417.livejournal.com]

Hey Jenny! Sorry I'm so late^^ Hehe~

Wow~ I haven't this song before^^
The lyrics tell a really beautiful story~
Thanks you so much for this!!!<3
And you did such a good job in translating it!
Both the English & Chinese! :DD
Gokurosama! m(_ _)m

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

Thank you An chan!

I'm soooooo glad!

Do you think I can help out with any Chinese Arashi translations for tsuribaka bc jeffer told me to ask you...

i mean you can be the editor..

i just want to thank the Arashi communities and the ppl with such hearts..

thanks

[change417.livejournal.com]

No no, I should be thanking YOU! Welcome^^

Ah, that! Why, that's nice of you<333
Wanting to thank the community with real action ne? ^____^

I discuss about it with you through email? Don't write everything in the comm^^ Hahaha. Your hotmail ne?^^

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

sure, i sent you an email to your gmail. tell me if you havent recieved it. you already have my msn anyway. ^_________^ so one way or the other (all roads lead to Rome)i guess , ahh, let's make it 'all roads lead to Arashi' XD hope it's not lame....

[genuyn.livejournal.com]

AHhh how come I didn't see this post in my flist? O_o
The translation is really beautiful!
I don't listen to that version a lot.
But the song is really adorable. So romannntic.
If only there was a guy to sing me this LMAO.
Thank you for the dedication! :DDDD You did a really great job!! ^___^

And again, Happy Chinese New Year (even though I'm a tad late XD)!

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

Thanks! ^__________________^ v

I swear that whoever that lucky girl would be as in the true Sho wifey, when she hears this, she's guaranteed to faith.

i was already half melting before i did the trans and then after im done, im well and truely melted to a puddle of happiness and bliss~

[potthebug.livejournal.com]

What a beautiful song! And thank you for sharing the translation so that we can understand Sho's message!

[jl2020.livejournal.com]

<<< see icon ;)

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa~~~~~~~~

I'm so, SHOOOOOOOOOO happy you commented!

I'll let you know something, if you go to zerocaster@LJ, the comm i organised again with another 3 Sho wifeys and a Jun wifey, you'll find that this song is being made into a karaoke clip~

pls look at for it either the end of this month or July~~~ ^____________^

*hugss*

Thank you again! I'm an amatuer when it ccomes to Jap translations so i wasnt expecting many comments so when i see one, i am very happy!

i translated it the best i can and asked a Jap friend to edit it for me~ so if you still find some mistakes, pls dont hesitate to tell me ok? ^___^ b